I have continued to work on the treatment for the project. A branching narrative is more difficult to write than I expected, but it's getting there, hopefully.
Here's an excerpt from the current treatment:
In pitch darkness, Nelly sees a pair of white eyes glaring at her.
She tries to run but her body is weighing down like lead. She then wakes up as
her eyes shoot open. It’s a sunny day outside. Her parents have already made
breakfast, and are heading out to go to work. Mum tells Nelly not to stay on
the computer for too long. But Nelly plays on her laptop anyway; her parents
never know how long she has been on. Suddenly, a huge spider drops down from
the ceiling onto her keyboard. She screams and leaps out of her chair. The
spider is unwilling to move, and begins crawling across the keyboard. Nelly is
too afraid to do anything. She goes outside and finds her mother picking roses
in one of the greenhouses. Nelly asks her mother to help her get rid of the spider.
Mother responds to her impatiently, saying that she is too busy working. Nelly
then goes to find her father, who is spraying chemicals in another greenhouse.
Nelly knows better than to go into a greenhouse that has been sprayed, so she
leaves. Without her computer games to entertain her, Nelly seeks other
activities to keep herself busy. Around the farm, she picks up various items
that will assist her in future events. She finds a pair of secateurs, a
sketchbook and a pencil, some matches and a stick. She goes on to play ball
with her dog, Rosie. They linger and wander around the farm aimlessly, until
Nelly finds a long branch and begins to play pretend, she is a warrior and
Rosie her noble stead. She skips rocks at the stream, catches butterflies.
Rosie finds a ball and drops it at Nelly’s feet. Nelly plays fetch with Rosie,
but instead of bringing the ball back, Rosie takes the ball and runs into the
old abandoned greenhouse. Nelly chases after Rosie, unaware that she has
stumbled into another world.
It was raining the past few days, so I drew Lu hopping around in the rain.
She likes rainy days.
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